[NeXus-committee] New NeXus Paper Draft V3

Thu Jul 24 18:14:41 BST 2014

My wife, Frances,  did a copy-edit pass and found some more.  Here is
the combined list:

1.  P.1, l 2.  change "Herbert Bernstein" to "Herbert J. Bernstein".
2.  P.1. l 11.  Change "imgCIF" to "imgCIF, Dowling College USA"
3.  P.1. col 1, l 7.  Change "home grown" to "home-grown"
4.  P.1. col 1, l 11.  Change "as she" to "as he/she"
5.  P.1. col 2, l 3.  Change "in a data format" to "for a data format"
6.  P.1. col 2, l 5.  Change "choose" to "chose"
7.  P.1. col 2, l 7.  Change "in the public domain" to "freely available
under an open source license"
8.  P.2. col 1, l 1.  Change "bam-" to "beam-"
9.  P.2. col 1, l 4.  Change "one logical file only" to "only one logical file"
10.  P.2. col 1, l. 14.  Change "public domain" to "open freely available"
11.  P.2. col 1, l 28.  Change "table" to "Table"
12.  P.2. col 1, l 37.  Change "It comes" to "It is"
13.  P.2. col 1, l 43.  Change "necesseary to add a type" to
"necessary to add type"
14.  P.2. col 2, TABLE 1, columns 1 and 2, and perhaps 3, change to
left-justified.
15.  P.3. col 1, TABLE II, caption, change "multiple method" to
"multiple methods"
16.  P.3. col 1, TABLE II, column 2, change to left-justified
17.  P.3. col 1, l 13, Change "table" to "Table"
18.  P.3. col 1, l 17, Change "is that in practice" to "is that, in practice"
19.  P.3. col 2, TABLE III, column 1 and column 2, change to left-justified
20.  P.3. col 2, l 3, Change "multi dimensional" to "multi-dimensional"
21.  P.3. col 2, l 3-4, Change "With the caveat" to "Note"
22.  P.3. col 2. l 6, Change "multi diemsnional" to "multi-dimensional"
23.  P.3. col 2, l 7. Change "one dimensional" to "one-dimensional"
24.  P.3. col 2, l -8.  Change "to ask for" to "to need"
25.  P.3. col 2, l -7.  Change "being" to "is"
26.  P.3. col 2, l -5.  Change "table" to "Table"
27.  P.4. col 1, l 2.  Change "multi dimensional" to "multi-dimensional"
28.  P.4. col 1, l -19.  Change "And a documentation" to "There is
also documentation"
29.  P.4. col 1, l -17.  Change "constitute" to "constitutes"
30.  P.4. col 1, l -15.  Change "no classes" to "not classes"
31.  P.4. col 1, l -12.  Change "not the case," to "not the case;"
32.  P.4. col 1, l -10. Change "to file" to "to the file".
33.  P.5. col 2. l 14-15.  Change "H. J. Bernstein and P. J. Ellis,
CBFlib (2014 (accessed july 2014)),
http://www.bernstein-plus-sons.com/software/CBF/." to "H. J.
Bernstein, P. J. Ellis, ``CBFlib: An ANSI C Library for Manipulating
Image Data'', chapter 5.6 in ``International Tables For
Crystallography, Volume G: Definition and Exchange of Crystallographic
Data,'' Vol. G, S. R. Hall and B. McMahon, eds., International Union
of Crystallography, Springer, Dordrecht, NL, 2005, pp. 544 -- 556.
See http://sf.net.projects/cbflib and
http://www.bernstein-plus-sons.com/software/CBF/"

On Thu, Jul 24, 2014 at 10:41 AM, Herbert J. Bernstein
<yayahjb at gmail.com> wrote:
> Dear Mark,
>
> Suggest changes:
>
> 1.  P.1, l 2.  change "Herbert Bernstein" to "Herbert J. Bernstein".
> 2.  P.1. l 11.  Change "imgCIF" to "imgCIF, Dowling College USA"
> 3.  P.1. col. 2, l 7.  Change "in the public domain" to "freely available
> under an open source license"
> 4.  P.2. col 1, l.1.  Change "bam-" to "beam-"
> 5.  P.2. col 1, l. 14.  Change "public domain" to "open freely available"
> 6.  P.4. col 1, l. -15.  Change "no classes" to "not classes"
> 7.  P.5. col 2. l 14-15.  Change "H. J. Bernstein and P. J. Ellis,
> CBFlib (2014 (accessed july 2014)),
> http://www.bernstein-plus-sons.com/software/CBF/." to "H. J.
> Bernstein, P. J. Ellis, ``CBFlib: An ANSI C Library for Manipulating
> Image Data'', chapter 5.6 in ``International Tables For
> Crystallography, Volume G: Definition and Exchange of Crystallographic
> Data,'' Vol. G, S. R. Hall and B. McMahon, eds., International Union
> of Crystallography, Springer, Dordrecht, NL, 2005, pp. 544 -- 556.
> See http://sf.net.projects/cbflib and
> http://www.bernstein-plus-sons.com/software/CBF/"
>
> Nice and useful paper.
>
> Regards,
>   Herbert
>
> On Thu, Jul 24, 2014 at 9:34 AM, Mark Könnecke <mark.koennecke at psi.ch> wrote:
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> find attached a draft for a new paper on NeXus  intended for publication in Reviews of Scientific
>> Instrumentation. A proper way of referencing NeXus was lacking and the last paper from 2005 is
>> quite old and does not reflect the current state anymore. The draft has been circulated through the
>> tech-committee for a few iterations; this is why it is already a V3.
>>
>> As all of you are listed as coauthors, please read and comment.
>>
>> For the more adventurous among you who wish to edit the paper:
>>  the latex sources for the paper are in the nexus_definition repository in the csipaper directory.
>> See NeXus on github at: https://github.com/nexusformat/definitions
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>>      Mark Könnecke
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
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