[Nexus-developers] SAS2009

[Mark Koennecke]

Freddy,

Akeroyd, FA (Freddie) wrote:
>
> Thanks for the comments – this is attempt two. There might be too many 
> references, but I wanted to give enough information for somebody who 
> hadn’t heard of NeXus and the technologies involved. What do you think?
>
> Can you also let me know the preferred wording for your correspondence 
> addresses for adding to the top of the paper
>
> Thanks,
>
> Freddie
>
*This is MUCH better. Only small things now: The first sentence in the 
second paragraph seems to have a verb missing. For the third paragraphi 
I would make it clearer that we present bot NXDL and an application 
definition for SAX raw and processed data.

Mark

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