[Nexus-developers] SAS2009

[Pete Jemian]

Freddie:

2nd version was a Big Improvement.

my wretched contributions include:
    wordsmithing
    added perspective from scientists (oh, them)
    added tie-in to proposition as a canSAS 2D standard

Pete


Mark Koennecke wrote:
> Freddy,
>
> Akeroyd, FA (Freddie) wrote:
>   
>> Thanks for the comments – this is attempt two. There might be too many 
>> references, but I wanted to give enough information for somebody who 
>> hadn’t heard of NeXus and the technologies involved. What do you think?
>>
>> Can you also let me know the preferred wording for your correspondence 
>> addresses for adding to the top of the paper
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Freddie
>>
>>     
> *This is MUCH better. Only small things now: The first sentence in the 
> second paragraph seems to have a verb missing. For the third paragraphi 
> I would make it clearer that we present bot NXDL and an application 
> definition for SAX raw and processed data.
>
> Mark
>
> *
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  Advanced Photon Source,   Argonne National Laboratory
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